We are a Year 4 class that is located in Auckland. We would love to share our work with you and receive some positive and constructive feedback.
Friday 24 July 2015
Explanation Writing - Our ideas about flight
Before going to MOTAT we wrote what we think makes things fly. Here are some of the stories that have been edited. We have yet to go back and craft them so that they are even more clear and informative.
Great pieces of writing about flight. Area 15 really likes the way you have structured your writing under subheadings.
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