We are a Year 4 class that is located in Auckland. We would love to share our work with you and receive some positive and constructive feedback.
I think that you had nice words about how the soldiers were marching. From Floyd
I really like the way you have included your senses in your poem. From Ivy
I think that you had nice words about how the soldiers were marching. From Floyd
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